pallmanni's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Sacrifice]

Nice!

i loved this song! i voted 5 on it, it's really good

check out my song called motorhjol, i'm pretty bummed because someone voted 0 for it, lowering it to 2.5, wich i think is pretty bad because my song never even got a chance :( might you be able to help?

[SpK*) - Spazatak]

i love it!

i love this song, this is a very good dnb song, but i think the beat needed a reverb :) otherwise it rules!..

[Far Away]

i like it :)

you reviewed my song so i guess it's fair that i review your's :), i like this song.. i voted 5 on all of your songs..

Mr-green-apple responds:

thanks for coming and listening. i hope you'll come back later when i get some better tracks.

[Dreamerz: Satan's Experiment]

Nice one

i think this is a bit to heavy to be ambient, isnt this more like dnb? because of the breakbeat, wich is really really cool by the way.. anyway, i voted 5 :)

itsameyayo responds:

Well, the whole of it is ambient, the beat is more DnB, yes, but overall, it's ambient, and I despise putting anything in the Misc. category, so I always find the closest musical genre. Thanks for the vote and the review man, really appreciated!

-ImperfectDisciple-

[-Blue Hands-]

NICE!!!

knox, i want i want i want to see you make more music!! you need to! dont stop making music and dont stop posting it here, we will all support you!

[Rebirth - short]

hmm.....

this is a total abuse of sytrus... no i kid, but, you should really use other stuff than sequences from sytrus, in the beggining, that is an arp, from sytrus, and then later on the atez sequence comes over, and its to repetedive, i gave you a low effort because these are just sequences from sytrus, well most of it... and i really do think you could make a better beat.. like so:

Kick : X...x...x...
Openhat : ..S...S...S.
Hihat : X.X.X.X.X.X.
VT_hihat1:SSSSSSSSSSSS lower the sound on it and add a delay effect, and then add a snare or a clap, maby set a reverb on that, thats a good start of a beat..
i am not saying that i could make a better song, i dont even think i could. but i think you should use maby another synth with the sytrus, like the 3x0sc, if you know how to tweak that synth right, you can get a good sound out of that, i used it much in my song called Loop, but yeah, your song is really neat, just try not to make your next one so repedetive and use other presets :)

SlikRik19 responds:

First of all, lemme say OMG, it's pallmanni, reviewing MY audio!!! I'm honored...
Second, hell yes you could make a better song, Zat remix is AMAZING!! (I haven't actually heard many of your others, but that one I did, and downloaded instantly...) I was actually thinkin of using it in one of my flashes.
Third, yea, like I said to some other dude, I am still learning FL, and Sytrus seems to be my only strong point, although I am getting better with a few others. I've fiddled around with the 3x0sc, but still have MUCH to learn about that. Next time I'll add in some other synth or something.
Thanks for all the help and the great review!

-SlikRik

[Shattered Dreams]

it's good

this is good, well done, but this is not techno, i think this would more be something like trance or dance.

[Cadence de Chilvan]

not so good

ok, sorry to say this, but this is sooooo easy to make, just take a bunch of samples in fl, make a totally RANDOM beat, and you get something like this...

DJ-Chilvan responds:

1. I used eJay, not FL.
2. I know its easy to make, I just wanted to show people that I can make beats that work well alone and with trance and dance songs.
3. Im not looking for praises here, im just looking for tips, questions, and answers.